Dear Miss Gluyas,
On Saturday I fell off my bike and now I have two scabs on my left leg. Anyway, I finished my maths, spelling test, reading and literacy. For VE Day I made scones and ginger beer. We also made a huge Union Jack flag and we painted it. The last thing we did was make mini Union Jack flags with VE Day In the middle. What did you do for VE Day? Your food sounds nice too. The ginger beer tastes like lemonade with ginger bits in it. My favourite was the scones they tasted really nice with jam and clotted cream. I really miss you and the class too.
Bye
It’s amazing all of the things that you did for VE Day! I love scones with jam and cream too. I hope your leg is feeling alright and you can ride again soon. I miss you and Y3 so much!
my favourite sentence from the second half of my story is, The camera is picked up by a bird, which takes it through the Antarctic before washing up on another beach.
Lydia’s comment – Dear Miss Gluyas
Here is my sentence for today:
Then he threw the camera out to sea and the sea animals took it and gave it to another girl.
Lots of love
Lydia
Dear Miss Gluyas,
On Saturday I fell off my bike and now I have two scabs on my left leg. Anyway, I finished my maths, spelling test, reading and literacy. For VE Day I made scones and ginger beer. We also made a huge Union Jack flag and we painted it. The last thing we did was make mini Union Jack flags with VE Day In the middle. What did you do for VE Day? Your food sounds nice too. The ginger beer tastes like lemonade with ginger bits in it. My favourite was the scones they tasted really nice with jam and clotted cream. I really miss you and the class too.
Bye
It’s amazing all of the things that you did for VE Day! I love scones with jam and cream too. I hope your leg is feeling alright and you can ride again soon. I miss you and Y3 so much!
The same day, he saw the other pictures of a child then another child like a pattern ,he was confused and curious.
This is my sentence miss Gluyas. II
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Very interesting sentence Celia.
Thanks
Hi Miss Gluyas,
my favourite sentence from the second half of my story is, The camera is picked up by a bird, which takes it through the Antarctic before washing up on another beach.
xxx from Sophie
Very creative! I like how your camera travelled in different ways.
He saw mysterious creatures and more children.
This is my favourite sentence.
I like the use of mysterious!
This is for the literacy to retell a story. My favourite sentence is the boy saw the amazing underwater pictures.
Great job Amana!
Lydia’s comment – Dear Miss Gluyas
Here is my sentence for today:
Then he threw the camera out to sea and the sea animals took it and gave it to another girl.
Lots of love
Lydia
I like that the sea animals took it!
I got 10 out of ……….7
Well done, also it’s 7 out of 10!