Dear Miss Cooley, I forgot to post my history work. This is it:
“Halt!”bellowed Hamlet at the vagabond. Hamlet then proceeded to remove his sword from its gleaming glittering sheath.
“Please do not harm me s-sir, I beg of thee!” The petrified vagabond said. Hamlet pointed his sword at the petrified vagabonds heart and said”Why hast thou been in pursuit of me?”The vagabond, paralyzed with fear,said nothing. As Hamlet
prepared to plunge his lusty sword into the mans wretched heart, Hamlet said “To die-to sleep,perchance to dream, ay theres the rub,for in the sleep of death,what dreams may come…”
That is my history work, hope you like it.
Azeem:)
Good Morning Miss Cooley and class I hope everybody is well.
I have just finished the Joe Wicks and now about to do the English Pobble but im not sure where to find it. (since i have finished the maths) Also Miss Cooley if the first news doesn’t work again for me what shall i do ?
Crystal 🙂
HIi Miss Cooley, I just tried to do the first news again and it worked !! 🙂 ( as well as doing the first news I will definitely have a look at the newspaper)
Also well done for your 5k run. This Sunday i will be going for a bike ride with my parents around st James park, Covent Garden ect..
Good Morning Miss Cooley here us the sentence challenge. Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Good morning Miss Cooley here is my answers to the pobble 365 sentences
Where do you think the creature has come from?
I think the creature has come from the deepest depths of the ocean.
What do you think it usually eats?
i think it usually eats killer whales and sharks and if it is really hungry it would make bouts sink and then eat whatever is inside them even humans!
why do you think it has come up to the surface?
i think it has come up to the surface because he has eaten all the killer whales,all the sharks and all the boats in the ocean so he has come to feast on the land creatures.
What do you think its feelings are towards humans?
I think he is a bit scared of humans because they build weird structures and eat all the land animals,they rule the land so he is not very happy about that because he is meant to rule the land just like the old days when the humans hadn’t even set a single foot on the earth.
Is it possible that there are see creatures as big as this one lurking in our waters?
i think it is possible because they could be living somewhere where submarines have not explored yet or even in the Bermuda triangle where no one dares to go.
Miss Cooley, this is my pobble work:
Viciously,an enormous tentacle, exploded out of the frothing,bubbling water, heading for the anxious crowd of people.
Hope it is correct,
Azeem
Hello miss cooley , you know for literacy do I answer the questions by looking at the picture and I can’t really find the sentence challenge you set for us
Hello Miss Cooley you were just on the phone to my dad. Sorry I couldn’t speak to u because I was asleep. I went to sleep at around 2 in the morning! This is my answer for the sentence challenge:
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people
Hi Miss Cooley, update from my dad yesterday. The test came back and it was negative. They said he’ll get his voice back in a couple of days and then he broke down. My dad is a person who doesn’t care about himself but others. He refused to do a video call yesterday as he thought that we would be upset.
Hello miss Cooley this is my sentence: Viciously,an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing,bubbling water, heading for the anxious crowd of people.
Miss Cooley, i think my answer had too many commas in it so i did it again.
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
sorry we missed your call this morning my mum was on the phone,
viciously an enormous tentacle out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading toward scared and anxious people.
I did do it before but I didn’t see that part of you saying that
Hello Miss Cooley, sorry that I didn`t blog you earlier. I could not send you a comment or reply for a long while. It was not working for some peculiar reason. But I managed to figure it out. I was getting worried. Hope that you are well. It`s quite late now, sorry. 🙂
Pobble answer:
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
I realised that you have to send it before 1pm. I will make sure that I would check if the comment bar works tomorrow.(Sorry for the technical difficulties) If that makes sense.
(hopefully it will work tomorrow). Sorry for the long story.
Bye 🙂
– Aidan
Hi miss Cooley,
I couldn’t send you the pobble365 sentence challenge today because my iPad had some problems, I couldn’t send anything cause the box to leave a comment wasn’t there but now it is. I didn’t know what happened. Anyway how have you been?
Kapo☺️
When I realised that I couldn`t write a comment, I fixed it because it didn`t make me fully logged in. So it thought I was a stranger I think and I was authorised to write a comment, but then I fixed it. 🙂
Dear Miss Cooley, I forgot to post my history work. This is it:
“Halt!”bellowed Hamlet at the vagabond. Hamlet then proceeded to remove his sword from its gleaming glittering sheath.
“Please do not harm me s-sir, I beg of thee!” The petrified vagabond said. Hamlet pointed his sword at the petrified vagabonds heart and said”Why hast thou been in pursuit of me?”The vagabond, paralyzed with fear,said nothing. As Hamlet
prepared to plunge his lusty sword into the mans wretched heart, Hamlet said “To die-to sleep,perchance to dream, ay theres the rub,for in the sleep of death,what dreams may come…”
That is my history work, hope you like it.
Azeem:)
Good morning,
You have used some great Shakespearian style language – well done.
Miss Cooley x
Good Morning Miss Cooley and class I hope everybody is well.
I have just finished the Joe Wicks and now about to do the English Pobble but im not sure where to find it. (since i have finished the maths) Also Miss Cooley if the first news doesn’t work again for me what shall i do ?
Crystal 🙂
Morning Crystal,
Well done for doing the Joe Wicks workout – I went on another 5k run this morning.
The Pobble 365 link is on the blog – you just need to copy and paste it.
If the First News still doesn’t work, you can read the actual newspaper from here…
https://www.allsoulsprimary.co.uk/children/first-news
Miss Cooley x
HIi Miss Cooley, I just tried to do the first news again and it worked !! 🙂 ( as well as doing the first news I will definitely have a look at the newspaper)
Also well done for your 5k run. This Sunday i will be going for a bike ride with my parents around st James park, Covent Garden ect..
I hope you have a good day !
Crystal 🙂
Great news about First News – I will check your work later.
Have a great day.
Miss Cooley x
Morning Miss Cooley, for the pobble, do we just do the sentence challenge and the other activitys or just the sentence challenge?
Thank you
Azeem:)
Morning Azeem,
You are meant to do the ‘Question time’ activity in your orange books. The ‘Sentence challenge’ is part of my weekly challenge for all of you.
Miss Cooley x
Good Morning Miss Cooley here us the sentence challenge. Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
This needs 1 more comma Arash.
Miss Cooley x
Sentence challenge: Viciously, an enormous tentacle, exploded out of the frothing bubbling water, heading straight for the anxious people.
You need 3 commas – you have 1 correct at the moment.
Miss Cooley x
sentence challenge:
Viciously, an enormous tentacle, exploded out of the frothing bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Crystal.
You have 3 commas but 1 is not in the correct place.
Miss Cooley x
sentence challenge:
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Is this correct Miss Cooley ?
Dear Crystal,
Your answer is now correct and you were one of the fastest 3 to respond. I wonder if you will be the fastest again tomorrow!
Miss Cooley x
Yay !! Thank you Miss Cooley 🙂
Good morning Miss Cooley here is my answers to the pobble 365 sentences
Where do you think the creature has come from?
I think the creature has come from the deepest depths of the ocean.
What do you think it usually eats?
i think it usually eats killer whales and sharks and if it is really hungry it would make bouts sink and then eat whatever is inside them even humans!
why do you think it has come up to the surface?
i think it has come up to the surface because he has eaten all the killer whales,all the sharks and all the boats in the ocean so he has come to feast on the land creatures.
What do you think its feelings are towards humans?
I think he is a bit scared of humans because they build weird structures and eat all the land animals,they rule the land so he is not very happy about that because he is meant to rule the land just like the old days when the humans hadn’t even set a single foot on the earth.
Is it possible that there are see creatures as big as this one lurking in our waters?
i think it is possible because they could be living somewhere where submarines have not explored yet or even in the Bermuda triangle where no one dares to go.
Morning Anna,
The ‘Question time’ activity is for your orange book. The ‘Sentence challenge’ is the one that you should be blogging before 1pm.
Miss Cooley x
oh sorry
Hi Miss Cooley,
Here is my pobble sentence challenge-
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Hope you are well!
Jimi
Dear Jimi,
Your answer is correct and you were one of the fastest 3 to respond. I wonder if you will be the fastest again tomorrow!
P.S I emailed your sequel to ‘The Promise’ to Mrs Plesniak – she was super impressed with your writing! Well done!!
Miss Cooley x
Wow, i’m happy with that, thank you! I will try to be the fastest tomorrow!
Miss Cooley can I try again?
Of course…
Miss Cooley x
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Aaron.
Dear Aaron,
Dear Aaron,
Your answer is correct and you were one of the fastest 3 to respond. I wonder if you will be the fastest again tomorrow!
Miss Cooley x
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Dear Mischa,
Your answer is now correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
Hello Miss Cooley
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowed of anxious
people.
From Jacob
Dear Jacob,
Your answer is correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
Oh 🙁 I did send it at 10.33.
I know…the fastest was sent through at 9.32am.
Miss Cooley x
Miss Cooley, this is my pobble work:
Viciously,an enormous tentacle, exploded out of the frothing,bubbling water, heading for the anxious crowd of people.
Hope it is correct,
Azeem
Hi Azeem,
Only 3 commas are needed,
Miss Cooley x
Hello miss cooley , you know for literacy do I answer the questions by looking at the picture and I can’t really find the sentence challenge you set for us
Hi Kimberly,
Yes, you use the picture to answer the questions.
The ‘Sentence challenge’ is on the same website page as the ‘Question time’ activity.
Miss Cooley x
I think it has come to the surface because there has been a lack of fish all around the massive seas so it had to result on us and animals.
Dear Jaber,
The ‘Question time’ work is for your orange book. The ‘Sentence challenge’ is what you need to blog before 1pm.
Miss Cooley x
Hello Miss Cooley you were just on the phone to my dad. Sorry I couldn’t speak to u because I was asleep. I went to sleep at around 2 in the morning! This is my answer for the sentence challenge:
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people
Dear Yasir,
Your answer is correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
Also u said to y dad that I haven’t submitted a hw assignment. Is it the first news?
Dear Yasir,
I understand about not being able to speak with me. I received your First News assignments from last week but not this week.
Miss Cooley x
Hi Miss Cooley, update from my dad yesterday. The test came back and it was negative. They said he’ll get his voice back in a couple of days and then he broke down. My dad is a person who doesn’t care about himself but others. He refused to do a video call yesterday as he thought that we would be upset.
I am so pleased that the test came back negative. I will call this afternoon to see how you are.
Miss Cooley x
Ok.
Hi Miss Cooley,
Sorry I couldn’t talk to you this morning. By the way can you please kindly remind Miss Plesniak about the reference?
Dear Oliver,
I will be calling back this afternoon. I will remind Mrs Plesniak about the reference.
With regards to the pencil case and book, you may need to wait until the next round of deliveries to take place.
Miss Cooley x
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious
people.
Adyan
Dear Adyan,
Your answer is correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
Hello miss Cooley this is my sentence: Viciously,an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing,bubbling water, heading for the anxious crowd of people.
Dear Kimberly,
Your answer is correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
Also can you send my pencil case and book (in my tray)
Miss Cooley, i think my answer had too many commas in it so i did it again.
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
Dear Azeem,
Your answer is now correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
sorry we missed your call this morning my mum was on the phone,
viciously an enormous tentacle out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading toward scared and anxious people.
I did do it before but I didn’t see that part of you saying that
bye
No problem Jez – i will be calling again in a bit.
Your sentence requires 1 more comma.
Miss Cooley x
Hello Miss Cooley, sorry that I didn`t blog you earlier. I could not send you a comment or reply for a long while. It was not working for some peculiar reason. But I managed to figure it out. I was getting worried. Hope that you are well. It`s quite late now, sorry. 🙂
Pobble answer:
Viciously, an enormous tentacle exploded out of the frothing, bubbling water, heading straight towards a crowd of anxious people.
I realised that you have to send it before 1pm. I will make sure that I would check if the comment bar works tomorrow.(Sorry for the technical difficulties) If that makes sense.
(hopefully it will work tomorrow). Sorry for the long story.
Bye 🙂
– Aidan
Dear Aidan,
Your answer is correct but you were not one of the fastest 3 to respond. Try to be one of the fastest in my challenge tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
Ok. 🙂
Miss Cooley I forgot to ask for my First news username. Can you please tell me it? Sorry 🙁
Hi Oliver,
You should have a piece of paper in your pack that has the username and password on it. If not, I will let you know.
Miss Cooley x
Are we just completing ‘Question Time’ for the Pobble?
-Aidan
For today, it is just ‘Question time’ – tomorrow it may be something different.
Miss Cooley x
Hi miss Cooley,
I couldn’t send you the pobble365 sentence challenge today because my iPad had some problems, I couldn’t send anything cause the box to leave a comment wasn’t there but now it is. I didn’t know what happened. Anyway how have you been?
Kapo☺️
No problem Kapo – Rahul has been having similar problems on his iPad. Hopefully you will be able to respond tomorrow.
I am very well – went for another 5k run this morning.
Miss Cooley x
When I realised that I couldn`t write a comment, I fixed it because it didn`t make me fully logged in. So it thought I was a stranger I think and I was authorised to write a comment, but then I fixed it. 🙂
Glad you worked this out for yourself. Some pupils are having problems with replying using an iPad.
Miss Cooley x
Good afternoon Miss Cooley i don’t understand the math week three
Hi Anna,
Which part do you not understand?
Miss Cooley x