Hi Miss Cooley, I couldn’t reply to your blog about the resolution because I saw my Dad and I had a cold/hay fever. I know I wasn’t top 3 but this is my resolution… The Creature from the deep composes his behaviour and goes back in the deep, deep sea. 2 boys (John and Max) see him stick his head out. They talk about what made him to this. The 2 boys support him to stop his uncontrollable behaviour.
Ending of the story:
A few days later, there was some speculation about the creature being exasperated about the overwhelming pollution done to his natural habitat, the ocean. It thought it was time to bite back… a few moments later, more pollution started flooding in, he couldn’t control his anger and decided to do it…
He came out the ocean like a hungry predator hunting for its prey. As he was approaching city, people looked up scared in despair. As scared as a victim getting hunted from his enemy. Trees were creeping forward as the humans started to run for their life. This rapid monster kept wagging his tail destroying every thing that was in sight. He was unimpressed by John and Max who promised to support him. But didn’t…
The whole city was destroyed but people remain. John and Max were seen running. They turned their back realising it was the destroyer, they tried all their best to stop him after they both said that they were sorry. Max stated that they didn’t bother to support. He announced it because he had some sorrow for him.
They told him they would actually support him. The monster felt it… it decided to compose. It went back to his home and John and Max decided to build a beach house next to the ocean to support the creature. While that was happening, the city was in construction. The pollution stopped and the monster was supported and never had to bite back again.
Thank you!
From last night, the hospital shifted my dad to a free Covid ward. He also did the deflation of the tracheostomy for 15 hrs! I still presume we can’t visit him yet. 🙁
Adyan
1 simile – Like a helpless fish stranded out of water.
1 metaphor – The free feast only breathed slowly and coldly in a dramatic rhythm, dum.. dum.. dum dum………..
1 personification piece – The wind whistled a warning song, it blew with power,knocking the child away, but he stumbled with determination to one of the many tentacles of the mysterious beast.
Is that all I have to send you?
Byee!!
-Aidan
Good morning Miss Cooley here are my answers to your challenge
simile:
The monster was as big as a sky scraper.
metaphor:
His eyes were hollow pits of darkness.
personification:
The buildings waived their last goodbyes as they crash landed to the into the growing mount of rubble .
At 6pm I am going to go to Regents Park with my dad for a 5km run I think then maybe again another day. I have hardly been outside of the house so it will be nice for me. Also usually I do not go on the runs because I could not or was not able ( I used another word but I did not know if it was really a word).Because the distance was much longer on something. It will be exciting and fun though.
Byeee!! Please let me know if I have for filled your challenge in the correct way. 🙂
Well done on you run:)
Maybe I am confusing myself with the distance. 🙂
– Aidan
Video message:
That is very nice and thoughtful of you and that makes me feel happy for him and good that he will see how kind you are and how you care very much. Makes me feel good.
🙂
– Aidan
Please let me know if I was one of the fasted in the challenge answer I posted up there ^. Takes a while if you sent a reply maybe thats why……………………………………………………………………………………………………|
– Aidan 🙂
Simile – Like a flimsy lego tower, the city crumbled.
Metaphor – It was hell released from its cage.
Personification – Havoc took grasp of the city, holding on tight, never letting go.
Good Morning Miss Cooley I hope this a good enough ending for the narrative ?
One second there was buildings for work, factories, and many other important places. One minute there was content families getting on with their day while the clouds up above surrounded them with graceful dances, along with the calming hums of the birds.
Abruptly, the next thing we know there is a creature from the deep aiming to crumble our land like a giant stepping on a humongous cookie. This place that was a home to others and now a complete everlasting death trap !
There was only one thing to do which was to run, but one brave and courageous young girl couldn’t face it to see all the memories here getting washed away as fast as you can blink. She knew she had to do something… so she did.
The only reason this monster came onto our land she thought is because his is ruined down there from all the plastic that gets dumped there every second of every minute of every hour each day…all day long…
She got the help of some friends to volunteer to get this ocean spick and span. They knew they had to do while this creature was busy taking over our homes, so very sneakily they got lots of help from everybody who has been affected from this beast and as a team they dived in and started to collect all the litter.
After a while they had finished, this sea creature was puzzled to what was happened. It was the sort of look of when you tidy your bedroom and then your parents walk in your room not knowing you did it look. This creature was happy to get his home back and so were everybody else.
Moral of the story: To start recycling and re-using to prevent littering and pollution increasing.
Crystal 🙂
Morning Miss Cooley,
Here are my 3 sentences:
-My mum and dad would always fight like cats and dogs but this time it was serious, I could see the look of fear in my mum’s eyes.
-I loved Sean like a second father but he always flew off the handle. It was his way or the highway always, he was a loose cannon and I couldn’t let him get in my way of saving grandad!
-As I approached the creature, the waves danced around me and the harbor bellowed my name.
You know the first news i am only receiving the “I’M IN MUM’S BAD BOOKS! comprehension not any other assignments.
Also how are you and your family doing ? 🙂
The Creature from the deep with its translucent body covered in blinding scales and slime was sent back into the stormy Ocean where it came from by a local young fisherman .He was the only one who understood the reason why the beast had risen to life from it’s deep slumber . Jake the fisherman enlisted the help of a group of locals and together they first cleaned up the beach from the giant rubble of plastic and garbage left by the people and also the Creature from the deep.
You see, the beast got as angry as an erupting volcano ,with the people for not taking care of the Oceans ,the Creature was sad , his eyes were screaming for help ,due to the entanglement his underwater life was affected by people’s poor choices when throwing plastic and disposing of their garbage in the salty Ocean waters. But once Jack and his friends made a strong promise to clear out the beach, the water and to take better care of the Ocean , of were the Creature went back to were it came from .
Hello miss Cooley these are my sentences: It reached out and like a blade swisher it right through a lucky empty building. The wind howled at this terrifyingly traumatic moment. The creature was a destructible beast looking for it’s next prey.
Good morning miss cooley I hope you are doing well this is my simile, metaphor and personification sentences
Everyone thought we was going to die. Its arms was running everywhere. The creature was as fierce as a group of hungry lions. Its was as purple as a deep bruise.
These are my 3 sentences:
Personification: Then, as the wrecked city sat there like an old lady by a fire.
Simile: They were as cold as ice.
Metaphor: They stood there, thinking, if anything, we must be aliens to the fish.
Those are my 3 sentences
By Azeem 🙂
Hi Miss Cooley, I couldn’t reply to your blog about the resolution because I saw my Dad and I had a cold/hay fever. I know I wasn’t top 3 but this is my resolution… The Creature from the deep composes his behaviour and goes back in the deep, deep sea. 2 boys (John and Max) see him stick his head out. They talk about what made him to this. The 2 boys support him to stop his uncontrollable behaviour.
Ending of the story:
A few days later, there was some speculation about the creature being exasperated about the overwhelming pollution done to his natural habitat, the ocean. It thought it was time to bite back… a few moments later, more pollution started flooding in, he couldn’t control his anger and decided to do it…
He came out the ocean like a hungry predator hunting for its prey. As he was approaching city, people looked up scared in despair. As scared as a victim getting hunted from his enemy. Trees were creeping forward as the humans started to run for their life. This rapid monster kept wagging his tail destroying every thing that was in sight. He was unimpressed by John and Max who promised to support him. But didn’t…
The whole city was destroyed but people remain. John and Max were seen running. They turned their back realising it was the destroyer, they tried all their best to stop him after they both said that they were sorry. Max stated that they didn’t bother to support. He announced it because he had some sorrow for him.
They told him they would actually support him. The monster felt it… it decided to compose. It went back to his home and John and Max decided to build a beach house next to the ocean to support the creature. While that was happening, the city was in construction. The pollution stopped and the monster was supported and never had to bite back again.
Dear Adyan,
Please do not apologise, I totally understand if you do not get your work done as fast as everyone else in Year 6.
This is an incredibly detailed piece of work – well done.
I have sent the video message for your Dad to Minhaj’s email address.
Miss Cooley x
Thank you!
From last night, the hospital shifted my dad to a free Covid ward. He also did the deflation of the tracheostomy for 15 hrs! I still presume we can’t visit him yet. 🙁
Adyan
You are welcome…I think I say ‘very’ a lot in my message!
So pleased to hear your Dad has been moved to a Covid-free ward – this is great news. Unfortunately, I don’t think you will be able to visit him yet.
Miss Cooley x
Morning Miss Cooley, 🙂
I’m currently planning how to start my story:)
Have a great day, how are your family 🙂
– Aidan
Morning Aidan,
All good here – I have just been for my 5k run and filmed a video message for Adyan’s Dad.
Miss Cooley x
My challenge answers: 🙂
1 simile – Like a helpless fish stranded out of water.
1 metaphor – The free feast only breathed slowly and coldly in a dramatic rhythm, dum.. dum.. dum dum………..
1 personification piece – The wind whistled a warning song, it blew with power,knocking the child away, but he stumbled with determination to one of the many tentacles of the mysterious beast.
Is that all I have to send you?
Byee!!
-Aidan
Good afternoon Aidan,
Well done with your figurative language sentences. You were one of the first three to blog your response – great work!!
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 again tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
Good morning Miss Cooley here are my answers to your challenge
simile:
The monster was as big as a sky scraper.
metaphor:
His eyes were hollow pits of darkness.
personification:
The buildings waived their last goodbyes as they crash landed to the into the growing mount of rubble .
Good afternoon Anna,
Well done with your figurative language sentences. You were one of the first three to blog your response – great work!!
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 again tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
thank you
Good morning Miss Cooley,do you have to write the resolution in the plan that we drew yesterday?
Yes – you need to complete the story today.
Miss Cooley x
Hi again Miss Cooley , I already finished the plan yesterday,so should we write it out properly?
Today’s home learning task is to write the ending of the story (using your plan from yesterday).
Miss Cooley x
Ok, thank you
And also the video for the maths doesn’t work and says there is an error.
Dear Olivia,
There may be an issue with the White Rose website – this sometimes happens when lots of people are trying to access it at the same time.
You can probably do today’s worksheet without watching the video – if it still doesn’t work.
What do you know about angles in a triangle? The angles will always add up to 180 degrees.
Miss Cooley x
At 6pm I am going to go to Regents Park with my dad for a 5km run I think then maybe again another day. I have hardly been outside of the house so it will be nice for me. Also usually I do not go on the runs because I could not or was not able ( I used another word but I did not know if it was really a word).Because the distance was much longer on something. It will be exciting and fun though.
Byeee!! Please let me know if I have for filled your challenge in the correct way. 🙂
Well done on you run:)
Maybe I am confusing myself with the distance. 🙂
– Aidan
Hi Aidan,
I will let everyone know if they fulfilled the challenge after 3.30pm.
Hope you have a good time at Regent’s Park – fresh air is really important.
Miss Cooley x
Video message:
That is very nice and thoughtful of you and that makes me feel happy for him and good that he will see how kind you are and how you care very much. Makes me feel good.
🙂
– Aidan
It made me quite tearful when I was videoing it.
Miss Cooley x
Please let me know if I was one of the fasted in the challenge answer I posted up there ^. Takes a while if you sent a reply maybe thats why……………………………………………………………………………………………………|
– Aidan 🙂
I will let everyone know after 3.30pm.
Miss Cooley x
Hello Miss Cooley,
Here is my figurative language:
Simile – Like a flimsy lego tower, the city crumbled.
Metaphor – It was hell released from its cage.
Personification – Havoc took grasp of the city, holding on tight, never letting go.
Good afternoon Aaron,
Well done with your figurative language sentences. You were one of the first three to blog your response – 3 days in a row!! Amazing!!
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 again tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
Good Morning Miss Cooley I hope this a good enough ending for the narrative ?
One second there was buildings for work, factories, and many other important places. One minute there was content families getting on with their day while the clouds up above surrounded them with graceful dances, along with the calming hums of the birds.
Abruptly, the next thing we know there is a creature from the deep aiming to crumble our land like a giant stepping on a humongous cookie. This place that was a home to others and now a complete everlasting death trap !
There was only one thing to do which was to run, but one brave and courageous young girl couldn’t face it to see all the memories here getting washed away as fast as you can blink. She knew she had to do something… so she did.
The only reason this monster came onto our land she thought is because his is ruined down there from all the plastic that gets dumped there every second of every minute of every hour each day…all day long…
She got the help of some friends to volunteer to get this ocean spick and span. They knew they had to do while this creature was busy taking over our homes, so very sneakily they got lots of help from everybody who has been affected from this beast and as a team they dived in and started to collect all the litter.
After a while they had finished, this sea creature was puzzled to what was happened. It was the sort of look of when you tidy your bedroom and then your parents walk in your room not knowing you did it look. This creature was happy to get his home back and so were everybody else.
Moral of the story: To start recycling and re-using to prevent littering and pollution increasing.
Crystal 🙂
Good afternoon Crystal,
What a great ending to the story! Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
I tried to create an arrow, it did not work.
What did you try to make it out of?
Miss Cooley x
Hi Aidan hope you are doing well.
To make an arrow try this ——^ : ——-^
See what I did there?
Adyan 🙂
Morning Miss Cooley,
Here are my 3 sentences:
-My mum and dad would always fight like cats and dogs but this time it was serious, I could see the look of fear in my mum’s eyes.
-I loved Sean like a second father but he always flew off the handle. It was his way or the highway always, he was a loose cannon and I couldn’t let him get in my way of saving grandad!
-As I approached the creature, the waves danced around me and the harbor bellowed my name.
Hope you enjoy the day!
Jimi
Good afternoon Jimi,
Well done with your figurative language sentences! Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
Hello Miss Cooley.
You know the first news i am only receiving the “I’M IN MUM’S BAD BOOKS! comprehension not any other assignments.
Also how are you and your family doing ? 🙂
Hello Crystal,
I am very well thank you. I am going to pop by and visit my Dad later on.
Do not worry if the First News website is not showing you any other assignments – just do what you can.
Miss Cooley x
Hi Miss Cooley. I bet your dad was excited to see you as well as Oreo !
and the first news is still not working but i have read the real newspaper 🙂
My Dad was excited to see me…Oreo acted as if I wasn’t there!!
Hopefully, the First News website will work better for you next week.
Miss Cooley x
is it okay if i don’t copy the thing that i said in the story plan
i really hate the thing i said in the story plan
Hi Anna,
You need to try and stick with your ideas – make sure you are happy with your plan next time. This will save you time.
Miss Cooley x
The Creature from the deep with its translucent body covered in blinding scales and slime was sent back into the stormy Ocean where it came from by a local young fisherman .He was the only one who understood the reason why the beast had risen to life from it’s deep slumber . Jake the fisherman enlisted the help of a group of locals and together they first cleaned up the beach from the giant rubble of plastic and garbage left by the people and also the Creature from the deep.
You see, the beast got as angry as an erupting volcano ,with the people for not taking care of the Oceans ,the Creature was sad , his eyes were screaming for help ,due to the entanglement his underwater life was affected by people’s poor choices when throwing plastic and disposing of their garbage in the salty Ocean waters. But once Jack and his friends made a strong promise to clear out the beach, the water and to take better care of the Ocean , of were the Creature went back to were it came from .
Good afternoon Karim,
What a great ending to the story! Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
Dear Miss Cooley, how are you. Today is my 11th birthday.
Goodbye.
Azeem 🙂
Good morning Azeem,
Happy Birthday to you!!
Hope you have a great day.
Miss Cooley x
Hello miss Cooley these are my sentences: It reached out and like a blade swisher it right through a lucky empty building. The wind howled at this terrifyingly traumatic moment. The creature was a destructible beast looking for it’s next prey.
*it reached out one of its tentacles and like a blade swished it right through a lucky empty building
Good afternoon Kimberly,
Well done with your figurative language sentences! Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
Good morning miss cooley I hope you are doing well this is my simile, metaphor and personification sentences
Everyone thought we was going to die. Its arms was running everywhere. The creature was as fierce as a group of hungry lions. Its was as purple as a deep bruise.
I hope your “VE” party was Good
from jez.
Good afternoon Jez,
You have tried hard with your figurative language sentences. Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
My VE Day street party did not happen as none of my neighbours came out to join in – I was the only one!!
Miss Cooley x
Hi mis cooley,
For the challenges do we need only need to write the 3 sentences?
Morning Kapo,
Your task (at home) is to write the ending of the story but you just need to reply to my blog with your 3 figurative sentences.
Miss Cooley x
Dear Miss Cooley,
What do we do when we finish doing the games?
From Karim
Morning Karim,
What games?
Miss Cooley x
Dear Miss Cooley,
It is the Macbeth assiment that you gave. We had to play two games.
From Karim
That is correct.
They are learning games.
Miss Cooley x
These are my 3 sentences:
Personification: Then, as the wrecked city sat there like an old lady by a fire.
Simile: They were as cold as ice.
Metaphor: They stood there, thinking, if anything, we must be aliens to the fish.
Those are my 3 sentences
By Azeem 🙂
Good afternoon Azeem,
Well done with your figurative language sentences! Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x
Thank you very much, hope you have a great day 🙂
Azeem
You are welcome – I have posted a message via the blog too.
Miss Cooley x
Hi Miss Cooley,
I was wondering where we had to post the challenge
Lorenzo
Hi Lorenzo,
You just need to write your response as a reply (like you have done here) to my blog.
Miss Cooley x
Ok thankyou 🙂
Lorenzo
Dear Miss Cooley,
Are you doing good?
I am good and fasting hope you have a nice day.
A monster as big as giants, may be even bigger.
The monster a bad temper a teapot would be.
The humans were in the octopus’s hand.
Love
Jaber
Good afternoon Jaber,
You have tried hard with your figurative language sentences. Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest three to blog your response.
I wonder if you will make it to the top 3 tomorrow?
Miss Cooley x