Good morning Miss Cooley, here is my resolution:
– The comforting warmth becomes a red, burning fireball
-2 lost people approached and consoled Astrid.
-The 2 lost people had these powers that would make the fireball a comforting warmth again.
Adyan
The glowing orb shimmered in the moonlight.The orb started to flash and in a deep voice the orb started to whisper it said “make a wish,make a wish,make a wish,”the girl made her first wish to fly.the orb glowed and flashed it became bigger and bigger and bigger until it was the size of her head,it flouted up into the sky and then suddenly the girl felt lighter and lighter and lighter,she too was floating she stretched her arms and legs and and she began to sore through the sky.but the orb was not the same as it used to be it was less lively and had lost its colour. but the girl carried on making wishes each one more extravagant than than the last.the orb slowly began to lose its colour and it began smaller and smaller until it was the size of the girls thumb but the girl just kept making wishes until the glowing orb had disappeared and from then on the girl could no longer make wishes but she learnt something,she learnt to never be selfish.
I am sorry that was the wrong one i think this one is better:
The glowing orb shimmered in the moonlight.It started to flash and in a deep voice the orb started to whisper it said:“Make a wish,make a wish,make a wish,”the girl made her first wish to fly.The orb glowed and flashed,it became bigger and bigger and bigger until it was the size of her head,it floated up into the sky and then suddenly the girl felt lighter.She was floating,she stretched her arms and legs and and she began to soar through the sky.The orb was not the same as it used to be,it was less lively and had lost its colour. The girl carried on making wishes each one more extravagant than than the last.The orb slowly began to lose its colour and it started to grow smaller and smaller until it was the size of the girls thumb. Astrid just kept making wishes until the glowing orb had disappeared
You were one of the 1st three to blog me your response. You only needed to send through a plan of your ending – the actual story writing will be from tomorrow.
Hi miss Cooley,
This is my resolution:
The light burst and got bigger so she ran behind the bush. She thought what she can use to make the light go away so she took of her coat and put it over. The material of the coat made the light go away.
Astrid was mesmerized by her surroundings and she was still thinking that ”all this must be a dream and I will soon wake out of it”;but it wasn’t a dream ,she was indeed the guest of honor of the Forest Queen Fairy. Astrid helped returning home ,the light fairy -the youngest daughter of Queen Fairy after she gotten lost deep in the forest. For Astrid’s bravery and courage that she showed when saving and returning the little fairy safe back to her kingdom ,the Queen bestowed Astrid as the new guardian of the forest ,a very important position in the fairy’s world.
From that day onward Astrid took on her new role very seriously and embarked herself on a knowledge journey on how to preserve the beauty of the forest ,how to keep it clean and how to ensure that everyone who visited the forest were treating it as a small heaven place that forest is and not tarnish it as lots of people used to do by dumping their garbage in the forest and not cleaning after them .
Good morning Miss Cooley. I am a bit late because my brother had to use the computer.Luckily, my mum brought her old laptop so I am using it (it is a bit slow.)
Goodbye
Azeem
Hello Miss Cooley.
How are you?
This is my resolution:
She was overwhelmed that she is holding some fairy dust on the earth where she can see the beautiful mountains, green landscape, birds chirping and the flower
This is my resolution:
Then, as Astrid starts to walk back to her house, she puts the star on her desk. Then as she wakes up to pick up the star the net day, she finds that the star has dissapeared …
The light shone brighter and brighter and the buzzing sound started to get louder and louder. The girl got more and more scared… but then silence came though out the forest. Then there was foot steps ,thud, thud, thud it came closer and closer and closer towards the girl. Then a black figure appeared in the forest then it was gone then. She woke up she was asleep on the forest floor asleep having a nightmare. Then she started to walk home with the bright thing in her hand the bright magic.
Hello Miss Cooley
Can you plz post the link for the white rose maths as a pdf cos I don’t have the sheet and when I try to open the link that u gave, I cant find angles in irregular polygons
Resolution:
• The thing leads the girl somewhere and she follows
• Discovers a world of magic and possibility
• The thing was asking for help
• It’s world was under attack
• The girls helps to save that world
• She is one with magic
• They go to each other worlds
• A witch was attacking them
• Defeats the Witch by turning her good
• Which is part of the world
• They are friends
• The end
🙂
My story might have a few changes and bits and bobs but I want to try out this story 🙂
Byeee how are you?
– Aidan
Also is this for everyone because whenever a switch device it takes a while to see any comments but like an hour later it shows comments and I know that it was not because someone just commented now because it shows a previous time they blogged. Eg. It is 5:00 I finally see new comments but turns out it was posted two hours ago.
Very strange. I am excited because there are only about three days left of Ramadan. How is your family Miss Cooley?
Bye!:)
– AidanYr6
My resolution:
She went to the forest to get some alone time since she was getting annoyed about her life, her parents , her friends and how they bully her. The little girl was crying as she walked. Almost in slow motion. I hate my life! Was all she could think of. She thought about people that have good lives, like some of her peers because she had no friends. She was just about to head home but then she saw something. Something shining in a shimmering light. She could not believe her eyes. Was this magic? she thought. She held it in her hand and made a wish. She knew that she had to hurry because it was dinner time soon. She wished for her family to care about her more and for her peers to be more friendly. Then she headed home. The next day, she heard something. Something that she had never heard her mum say. ever. wake up sweetie. Her mum used to be really grumpy when she used to wake her up. Was this the orb in effect? She went downstairs and her breakfast was made in front of her. Pncakes and maple syrup. Just when she thought she couldn’t get more confused when her dad said eat up love then get dressed or otherwise well be late. This shocked her. Did the orb change her life for the good??
This is the plan of my resolution:
The girl heads rustling sound from the bushes and a few seconds later her friends come out, she’s relieved that she is no longer lost but when she looks around she realizes that the light is gone
Oh Miss Cooley I was doing first news and I came back here and realized that the button didn’t work so this not when I wrote my resolution to you
It says you posted it at 11:54 but it came through at 12:54. Remember, I said that the blog is possibly a site that does not follow our daylight saving time.
I know I was asking about comments not showing for me until like two hours later. It happened now, it was only on 8 comments, then suddenly on 40 something, it is quite slow to show me new comments and even when I switch device it still happens.
Hi Miss Cooley,
How are you?
I just wanted to say that it is really strange that I checked the school blog and your blog didn’t come appear until 9:15 am nor there were no blogs from anyone else.
Is this something to do with the website or the application.
I was doing 9 to 9:30 Pe with Joe.
Rahul
Good morning Miss Cooley, here is my resolution:
– The comforting warmth becomes a red, burning fireball
-2 lost people approached and consoled Astrid.
-The 2 lost people had these powers that would make the fireball a comforting warmth again.
Adyan
Well done Adyan,
You were one of the 1st three to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
The glowing orb shimmered in the moonlight.The orb started to flash and in a deep voice the orb started to whisper it said “make a wish,make a wish,make a wish,”the girl made her first wish to fly.the orb glowed and flashed it became bigger and bigger and bigger until it was the size of her head,it flouted up into the sky and then suddenly the girl felt lighter and lighter and lighter,she too was floating she stretched her arms and legs and and she began to sore through the sky.but the orb was not the same as it used to be it was less lively and had lost its colour. but the girl carried on making wishes each one more extravagant than than the last.the orb slowly began to lose its colour and it began smaller and smaller until it was the size of the girls thumb but the girl just kept making wishes until the glowing orb had disappeared and from then on the girl could no longer make wishes but she learnt something,she learnt to never be selfish.
I am sorry that was the wrong one i think this one is better:
The glowing orb shimmered in the moonlight.It started to flash and in a deep voice the orb started to whisper it said:“Make a wish,make a wish,make a wish,”the girl made her first wish to fly.The orb glowed and flashed,it became bigger and bigger and bigger until it was the size of her head,it floated up into the sky and then suddenly the girl felt lighter.She was floating,she stretched her arms and legs and and she began to soar through the sky.The orb was not the same as it used to be,it was less lively and had lost its colour. The girl carried on making wishes each one more extravagant than than the last.The orb slowly began to lose its colour and it started to grow smaller and smaller until it was the size of the girls thumb. Astrid just kept making wishes until the glowing orb had disappeared
Well done Anna,
You were one of the 1st three to blog me your response. You only needed to send through a plan of your ending – the actual story writing will be from tomorrow.
Miss Cooley x
sorry
Hi Anna,
No need to apologise.
Miss Cooley x
Hi miss Cooley,
This is my resolution:
The light burst and got bigger so she ran behind the bush. She thought what she can use to make the light go away so she took of her coat and put it over. The material of the coat made the light go away.
Bye
Kapo
Well done Kapo,
You were one of the 1st three to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
Astrid was mesmerized by her surroundings and she was still thinking that ”all this must be a dream and I will soon wake out of it”;but it wasn’t a dream ,she was indeed the guest of honor of the Forest Queen Fairy. Astrid helped returning home ,the light fairy -the youngest daughter of Queen Fairy after she gotten lost deep in the forest. For Astrid’s bravery and courage that she showed when saving and returning the little fairy safe back to her kingdom ,the Queen bestowed Astrid as the new guardian of the forest ,a very important position in the fairy’s world.
From that day onward Astrid took on her new role very seriously and embarked herself on a knowledge journey on how to preserve the beauty of the forest ,how to keep it clean and how to ensure that everyone who visited the forest were treating it as a small heaven place that forest is and not tarnish it as lots of people used to do by dumping their garbage in the forest and not cleaning after them .
Thank you Karim,
This is a very detailed response – remember, you only needed to respond with a plan of your ending. Tomorrow you will be actually writing the story.
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
Good morning Miss Cooley. I am a bit late because my brother had to use the computer.Luckily, my mum brought her old laptop so I am using it (it is a bit slow.)
Goodbye
Azeem
Morning Azeem,
I am pleased that you have another laptop to use. My old laptop is a bit slow too!
Miss Cooley x
Hello Azeem 🙂 How are you doing.
– Aidan Yr potato
Good morning Miss Cooley, I didn’t understand you the blog so should we fill the planning frame?
Morning Olivia,
Just tried to call your Mum – will try again later.
This is the same challenge as last week – fill out the planning sheet in your orange book and blog me your ideas from the ‘Resolution’ box.
Miss Cooley x
Ok thank you.Sorry about not answering my mum had her phone turned off. You can call whenever you want.
No problem.
I am about to have some lunch and will begin phoning again after that.
Miss Cooley x
Hello Miss Cooley.
How are you?
This is my resolution:
She was overwhelmed that she is holding some fairy dust on the earth where she can see the beautiful mountains, green landscape, birds chirping and the flower
Thank you Rahul,
How will your story end?
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
Flower touching the sky.
(At the end)
Help miss cooley , I just want to say thank you a lot for the postcard. Hope you, your dad and your cat are doing fine.
Morning Kimberly,
You are more than welcome – I am pleased it arrived.
We are all doing well.
Miss Cooley x
This is my resolution:
Then, as Astrid starts to walk back to her house, she puts the star on her desk. Then as she wakes up to pick up the star the net day, she finds that the star has dissapeared …
Thank you Azeem,
i really like your idea.
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
my story planer. bye jez
The light shone brighter and brighter and the buzzing sound started to get louder and louder. The girl got more and more scared… but then silence came though out the forest. Then there was foot steps ,thud, thud, thud it came closer and closer and closer towards the girl. Then a black figure appeared in the forest then it was gone then. She woke up she was asleep on the forest floor asleep having a nightmare. Then she started to walk home with the bright thing in her hand the bright magic.
Thank you Jez,
What will happen at the very end? Will she keep the magic?
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
Dear Miss Cooley,
The science link from yesterday is not working.
Karim
Hi Karim,
It works for me when I use this link…
https://all-souls-cofe-primary-school.j2webby.com/?attachment_id=3782
Then you click on this link…
?attachment_id=3782
Miss Cooley x
Hello Karim 🙂 How are you,
– Aidan
Hi Aidan,I am good thank you.You?
How’s the family ?I’ve started fasting during the Ramadan not whole day as my mum wouldn’t let me.
Karim
Hello Miss Cooley
Can you plz post the link for the white rose maths as a pdf cos I don’t have the sheet and when I try to open the link that u gave, I cant find angles in irregular polygons
Dear Yasir,
I have uploaded all of the worksheets this week for you…in case you need all of them. Here are the links…
https://all-souls-cofe-primary-school.j2webby.com/?attachment_id=3999
https://all-souls-cofe-primary-school.j2webby.com/?attachment_id=3996
https://all-souls-cofe-primary-school.j2webby.com/?attachment_id=3997
https://all-souls-cofe-primary-school.j2webby.com/?attachment_id=3998
Hope that helps.
Miss Cooley x
Resolution:
• The thing leads the girl somewhere and she follows
• Discovers a world of magic and possibility
• The thing was asking for help
• It’s world was under attack
• The girls helps to save that world
• She is one with magic
• They go to each other worlds
• A witch was attacking them
• Defeats the Witch by turning her good
• Which is part of the world
• They are friends
• The end
🙂
My story might have a few changes and bits and bobs but I want to try out this story 🙂
Byeee how are you?
– Aidan
Thank you Aidan,
This is a very detailed response – try to not keep changing things around. Stick to your plan as you can edit later on.
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
Also is this for everyone because whenever a switch device it takes a while to see any comments but like an hour later it shows comments and I know that it was not because someone just commented now because it shows a previous time they blogged. Eg. It is 5:00 I finally see new comments but turns out it was posted two hours ago.
Very strange. I am excited because there are only about three days left of Ramadan. How is your family Miss Cooley?
Bye!:)
– AidanYr6
My Dad and Oreo are well.
I am hoping to do a bit of gardening later on today.
Miss Cooley x
My resolution:
She went to the forest to get some alone time since she was getting annoyed about her life, her parents , her friends and how they bully her. The little girl was crying as she walked. Almost in slow motion. I hate my life! Was all she could think of. She thought about people that have good lives, like some of her peers because she had no friends. She was just about to head home but then she saw something. Something shining in a shimmering light. She could not believe her eyes. Was this magic? she thought. She held it in her hand and made a wish. She knew that she had to hurry because it was dinner time soon. She wished for her family to care about her more and for her peers to be more friendly. Then she headed home. The next day, she heard something. Something that she had never heard her mum say. ever. wake up sweetie. Her mum used to be really grumpy when she used to wake her up. Was this the orb in effect? She went downstairs and her breakfast was made in front of her. Pncakes and maple syrup. Just when she thought she couldn’t get more confused when her dad said eat up love then get dressed or otherwise well be late. This shocked her. Did the orb change her life for the good??
Thank you Yasir,
This is a very detailed response – remember, you only needed to respond with a plan of your ending. Tomorrow you will be actually writing the story.
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
This is the plan of my resolution:
The girl heads rustling sound from the bushes and a few seconds later her friends come out, she’s relieved that she is no longer lost but when she looks around she realizes that the light is gone
Oh Miss Cooley I was doing first news and I came back here and realized that the button didn’t work so this not when I wrote my resolution to you
Thank you Kimberly,
I wonder what happened to the light?
Unfortunately, you were not one of the fastest to blog me your response.
Miss Cooley x
What time does it say that I posted this comment?
It says you posted it at 11:54 but it came through at 12:54. Remember, I said that the blog is possibly a site that does not follow our daylight saving time.
Miss Cooley x
I know I was asking about comments not showing for me until like two hours later. It happened now, it was only on 8 comments, then suddenly on 40 something, it is quite slow to show me new comments and even when I switch device it still happens.
That is because I have to approve them before they show.
Miss Cooley x
Hi Miss Cooley,
How are you?
I just wanted to say that it is really strange that I checked the school blog and your blog didn’t come appear until 9:15 am nor there were no blogs from anyone else.
Is this something to do with the website or the application.
I was doing 9 to 9:30 Pe with Joe.
Rahul
Good afternoon Rahul,
Teachers need to upload their blogs by 9.30am, so that is why some of them are not appearing until 9.15am.
Miss Cooley x
Oh, that makes sense 🙂 but isn`t it very time consuming for you?
I am happy to spend my time doing this. If I was at school, I would be working.
Miss Cooley x
You are very generous and kind. Thank you!!!:¬)
– Aidan
You are welcome – it is my pleasure.
Miss Cooley x