Dear Miss Gluyas,
Sorry I didn’t comment on the post yesterday I couldn’t think of wahat to say. Anyway I am today. I have done my maths I found the problem solving a bit hard but I did it I did my spelling too. Yesterday I made marshmallow squares which is rice krispies mixed with melted marshmallow and then put in the fridge to dry. When they were ready they tasted really nice. This morning I went round Fitzroy square 13 times on my bike. I am just about to have lunch and then after my literacy. For lunch I’m going to have a croissant with cheese on it. Yesterday I had dinner outside on some tables. I had a fish finger burger with chips it tasted really yummy! I read 200 pages of my book it just got good. I am so excited to finish it. I am on part 3, chapter 53 and page 367. So this week I am probably going to start a new book after half term. I should probably go now.
Bye
That’s okay! Those marshmallow squares sound yum. I rode to Hyde Park today and it was sooooo fun! I am going to have a chicken wrap for dinner. I’m so glad you’re enjoying your book, I hope the next book is just as good!
Hi Miss Gluyas I have had trouble trying to leave a comment again, but this time it worked. Here is my Literacy.
“Hi Darcy areyou ready to go?”
“Hi Vilma, yes I am ready, but I’m also nervous! how about you how do you feel?”
“I feel nervous too but also excited!”
“Ok let’s do this!”
This is my conversation between two astronauts using inverted commas.”We made it! As much as I want to celebrate we need to complete are mission ,I know you will do great”.
Hi Miss Gluyas I am going to tell you my conversation for pobble.
As soon as Darcey and the team got in the rocket Darcey said “is there any cheese on the moon because in movies there are?”
“No” said one of the team members. “The movies are fiction” Darcey answered, “well we will see if that is true.”
I hope you like it!
XXXXXXXXXXX from Rougayatou
As soon as Max jumped on the rocky, grey moon , he was excited he said
“Everybody we made it to the moon.” Everyone clapped on the rocky moon.” Now hurry up everybody.”
As soon as Darcey and her team reached the space station, she looked at her team and smiled at them brightly “well done team you really out done your self”, lets do what we came here to do ok “?
“Ok Darcey ” said her team
I tried to post this earlier but it wouldn’t let me, My space conversation is,
Astronaut 1 – ‘This mission is important we need to do this! We need to go to the moon!’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok I’ll do what ever it takes! So what do you want me to do?’
Astronaut 1- ‘ I want you to get the crew and the spaceship ready’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok that’s fine, when do you want me to do it?’
Astronaut 1- ‘ This afternoon’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok’
Astronaut 1- ‘ Now go and get your suits on’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok’
Dear Miss Gluyas,
Sorry I didn’t comment on the post yesterday I couldn’t think of wahat to say. Anyway I am today. I have done my maths I found the problem solving a bit hard but I did it I did my spelling too. Yesterday I made marshmallow squares which is rice krispies mixed with melted marshmallow and then put in the fridge to dry. When they were ready they tasted really nice. This morning I went round Fitzroy square 13 times on my bike. I am just about to have lunch and then after my literacy. For lunch I’m going to have a croissant with cheese on it. Yesterday I had dinner outside on some tables. I had a fish finger burger with chips it tasted really yummy! I read 200 pages of my book it just got good. I am so excited to finish it. I am on part 3, chapter 53 and page 367. So this week I am probably going to start a new book after half term. I should probably go now.
Bye
That’s okay! Those marshmallow squares sound yum. I rode to Hyde Park today and it was sooooo fun! I am going to have a chicken wrap for dinner. I’m so glad you’re enjoying your book, I hope the next book is just as good!
Hi Miss Gluyas I have had trouble trying to leave a comment again, but this time it worked. Here is my Literacy.
“Hi Darcy areyou ready to go?”
“Hi Vilma, yes I am ready, but I’m also nervous! how about you how do you feel?”
“I feel nervous too but also excited!”
“Ok let’s do this!”
Great use of inverted commas!
Dear Miss Gluyas,
This is my conversation between two astronauts using inverted commas.”We made it! As much as I want to celebrate we need to complete are mission ,I know you will do great”.
Great job!
Hi Miss Gluyas I am going to tell you my conversation for pobble.
As soon as Darcey and the team got in the rocket Darcey said “is there any cheese on the moon because in movies there are?”
“No” said one of the team members. “The movies are fiction” Darcey answered, “well we will see if that is true.”
I hope you like it!
XXXXXXXXXXX from Rougayatou
This is very funny!
As soon as Max jumped on the rocky, grey moon , he was excited he said
“Everybody we made it to the moon.” Everyone clapped on the rocky moon.” Now hurry up everybody.”
Great sentences!
As soon as Darcey and her team reached the space station, she looked at her team and smiled at them brightly “well done team you really out done your self”, lets do what we came here to do ok “?
“Ok Darcey ” said her team
From Azaan 🙂
Great! Remember the question mark always goes inside the speech marks.
Dear Miss Gluyas,
Here is my sentence for pobble:
”Finally we are back! My oxygen was running low”, said Darcey.
I hope you are well,
Lots of love
Lydia xxx
Great! Remember the comma goes inside the speech mark.
As soon as Darcey and her team arrived at the space station, she looked at them and said,” lets go team we need to do the mission.”
Great job!
“Hey mike don’t bump into me “, said Max while floating outside the space station.
Great job! Don’t forget the comma goes inside the speech marks.
Hi miss,
This is my literacy sentence, what do you think about it?
“Come on team we have a mission to do, but remember lets enjoy our time in space.”
I love it!
Hi Miss Gluyas,
I tried to post this earlier but it wouldn’t let me, My space conversation is,
Astronaut 1 – ‘This mission is important we need to do this! We need to go to the moon!’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok I’ll do what ever it takes! So what do you want me to do?’
Astronaut 1- ‘ I want you to get the crew and the spaceship ready’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok that’s fine, when do you want me to do it?’
Astronaut 1- ‘ This afternoon’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok’
Astronaut 1- ‘ Now go and get your suits on’
Astronaut 2- ‘Ok’
From Sophie
This is fantastic! Don’t forget punctuation at the end of every sentence.