Here is my edited piece of work:
Astrid stood in the dark,gloomy forest,she was wearing a tattered,torn dress.The glowing orb shimmered in the moonlight.It started to flash and in a deep voice the orb started to whisper it said:“Make a wish,make a wish,make a wish,”the girl made her first wish.
“I wish to fly,”her voice was fragile but also parched.
The orb glowed and flashed,it became bigger and bigger until it was the size of her head,it floated up into the sky and then suddenly the girl felt lighter.She was floating!She stretched her arms and legs and and she began to soar through the sky.The orb was not the same as it used to be,it was less lively and had lost its colour. Astrid carried on making wishes each one more extravagant than than the last.The orb slowly became duller and duller and it started to grow smaller and smaller until it was the size of the girls thumb. Astrid just kept making wishes until the glowing orb had disappeared.
Hello, good luck on the packs!!! Thanks you and have a great day!!
– Aidan Yr The potato is a root vegetable native to the Americas, a starchy tuber of the plant Solanum tuberosum, and the plant itself, a perennial in the family Solanaceae. Wild potato species, originating in modern day Peru, can be found throughout the Americas, from the United States to southern Chile.
hi
Hi Karim,
Hope you are well.
Miss Cooley x
Good morning Miss Cooley
I have a question:what is the challenge for today?
Also i had trouble with yesterdays math so is it OK if i miss some(i did try)
sorry
That is okay – at least you had a go.
What did you find hard?
Miss Cooley
Hi Anna,
It does say in my blog that there is no challenge today as i am in school preparing learning packs.
Miss Cooley x
oh sorry
Dear Miss Cooley,
Where do we have write the checklist? In our orange book?
Karim
Hi Karim,
Yes., you can do it in your orange book.
Miss Cooley x
Here is my edited piece of work:
Astrid stood in the dark,gloomy forest,she was wearing a tattered,torn dress.The glowing orb shimmered in the moonlight.It started to flash and in a deep voice the orb started to whisper it said:“Make a wish,make a wish,make a wish,”the girl made her first wish.
“I wish to fly,”her voice was fragile but also parched.
The orb glowed and flashed,it became bigger and bigger until it was the size of her head,it floated up into the sky and then suddenly the girl felt lighter.She was floating!She stretched her arms and legs and and she began to soar through the sky.The orb was not the same as it used to be,it was less lively and had lost its colour. Astrid carried on making wishes each one more extravagant than than the last.The orb slowly became duller and duller and it started to grow smaller and smaller until it was the size of the girls thumb. Astrid just kept making wishes until the glowing orb had disappeared.
Well done Anna,
You have used some lovely vocabulary.
Miss Cooley x
thanks
Dear Miss Cooley,
Thank you very much for the post card you sent me I love it.
From Jacob
Dear Jacob,
You are more than welcome – glad you like it!
Miss Cooley x
Hello, good luck on the packs!!! Thanks you and have a great day!!
– Aidan Yr The potato is a root vegetable native to the Americas, a starchy tuber of the plant Solanum tuberosum, and the plant itself, a perennial in the family Solanaceae. Wild potato species, originating in modern day Peru, can be found throughout the Americas, from the United States to southern Chile.
Oh sorry, my bad.
– AidanYr6
Hi Aidan,
Packs are all ready to be delivered tomorrow!
Potato facts?
Miss Cooley x
Yeah umm well done on the packs. I don`t know either with the potato facts.
My mistake.
– Aidan Yr6 🙂
Hi Miss Cooley I didn’t write the checklist in my book is that ok?
Hi Olivia,
That is fine.
Miss Cooley x
Hello miss cooley, I can’t see the blog for today yet.
Morning Kimberly,
Blog is about to be uploaded.
Miss Cooley x