Dear Miss Gluyas,
My setting description:
The sunlight glimmers over the beautiful city of Pompeii, as it stands before it’s protector Mount Vesuvius. The people of Pompeii awakes at the sounds of birds chirping. Soon the long, cobbled roads of Pompeii are full of tradesmen shouting their prices, fishermen catching smelly fish and people rushing home with their goods. The sound of the huge, waves crashing against the bay and carts wobbling as they are pulled along the roads. Tall, white houses surrounding the city. there is a sense of happiness and safety as the sea sprays constantly over the wealthy citizens of Pompeii.
I hoped you liked my setting description.
Elizabeth
Betty, this is fantastic! I just read this out to Safa and Areej and they closed their eyes and they said they could picture it really clearly, so well done!
Hi Miss Gluyas I am going to comment on literacy for today.
The air is filled with sweet smelling baked bread and salty water.
I hope you love it
XXXXX from Rougayatou
The glittering water in the beach and the cool fresh air in the wind that the fishermen are enjoying to fish to sell in a small market for some good trades!
This is for Pompeii. The sunlight shines on the city of Pompeii. Birds are chirping, and wonderful people chatting. I can smell the fresh cool breeze in the air. I can smell fresh baked bread and strong rich smell of wine. I see the tradesmen selling little goodies to the children. I feel intrigued of what the tradesmen are selling. I felt very calm of when I saw the fresh sparkling water in the ocean. Hope you liked my setting description! XOXO Amana
Hi MISS
This is my literacy
The sun made my sweat drip across my face, The freash air smelt better than ever, The vases felt very heavy and the boat felt rough and hard. I noticed a fisherman in a boat far from land . As the sun set in pompie I can hear the birds tweeting across the sky.I can feel the crust of the baked bread and the sweet freshly baled bread.The vases smelt like burnt clay reasy to ve sold. I can hear the waves splashing on the boat and on me.
Dear Miss Gluyas,
My setting description:
The sunlight glimmers over the beautiful city of Pompeii, as it stands before it’s protector Mount Vesuvius. The people of Pompeii awakes at the sounds of birds chirping. Soon the long, cobbled roads of Pompeii are full of tradesmen shouting their prices, fishermen catching smelly fish and people rushing home with their goods. The sound of the huge, waves crashing against the bay and carts wobbling as they are pulled along the roads. Tall, white houses surrounding the city. there is a sense of happiness and safety as the sea sprays constantly over the wealthy citizens of Pompeii.
I hoped you liked my setting description.
Elizabeth
Betty, this is fantastic! I just read this out to Safa and Areej and they closed their eyes and they said they could picture it really clearly, so well done!
Hi Miss Gluyas,
How Are you? My favourite sentence of my description is, People all around the village of Pompeii felt safe and relaxed in a calm environment.
xxx from Sophie
Great sentence about the feeling.
i done my homework
Amazing Ziyad, can you share one of your sentences from Literacy?
Does it mean were supposed to make a setting description but with our see hear feel and touch?
Yes, just like mine! Describe Pompeii using your word bank and describe what you can see, hear, smell and feel.
Hi Miss Gluyas I am going to comment on literacy for today.
The air is filled with sweet smelling baked bread and salty water.
I hope you love it
XXXXX from Rougayatou
Fantastic!
Hi miss Gluyas
This my sentence
The glittering water in the beach and the cool fresh air in the wind that the fishermen are enjoying to fish to sell in a small market for some good trades!
Great adjectives, just reread it and make sure it makes sense.
This is for Pompeii. The sunlight shines on the city of Pompeii. Birds are chirping, and wonderful people chatting. I can smell the fresh cool breeze in the air. I can smell fresh baked bread and strong rich smell of wine. I see the tradesmen selling little goodies to the children. I feel intrigued of what the tradesmen are selling. I felt very calm of when I saw the fresh sparkling water in the ocean. Hope you liked my setting description! XOXO Amana
This is excellent, well done!
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sorry this is it the people of pomielp caught freshly dry meat
Great sentence!
Good Afternoon Miss Gluyas here is my favorite sentence
The sun shone on the town of Pompeii as the people were buying and selling goods. 🙂
I really like it!
Hi MISS
This is my literacy
The sun made my sweat drip across my face, The freash air smelt better than ever, The vases felt very heavy and the boat felt rough and hard. I noticed a fisherman in a boat far from land . As the sun set in pompie I can hear the birds tweeting across the sky.I can feel the crust of the baked bread and the sweet freshly baled bread.The vases smelt like burnt clay reasy to ve sold. I can hear the waves splashing on the boat and on me.
This is excellent Asif! So much description, I can really imagine it in my head.