The same day the children fell asleep on the boat because there was dust everywhere, as they slept everyone on the boat’s and were terrified as they couldn’t breathe properly because of the ash.
Hi Miss Gluyas I am going to comment on literacy for today.
Many years past and an old lady holding hands with an old man were standing under an orange tree in Pompeii.
I hope you love it.
XXXXX from Rougayatou
Miss Gluyas do we have to copy the story words or copy the story in our own words?
You are retelling the story so write it in your own words.
My favourite sentence is grey clouds are covering the sky and pumice ashes crumbling down on poor Pompeii! Hope you like my sentence! XOXO Amana!
I really like it!
miss gluyas can we write the whole story on one page xxxx khaled
If you can fit it all!
my favorite scentence is there was a earthquake so he went to tell livia
Don’t forget to use adjectives!
my favourite sentence is the mountain furiously let loose its grey fiery ash which surrounded the city of Pompeii
Very interesting!
Hi miss Gluyas
The same day the children fell asleep on the boat because there was dust everywhere, as they slept everyone on the boat’s and were terrified as they couldn’t breathe properly because of the ash.
Great but please read it before you post it, it doesn’t make sense.
Hi miss Gluyas this is a remake of my sentence
Suddenly the lovely blue sky of Pompeii began to darken, there was dust everywhere that it made the children sleep in the old rusty boats!
Even better!
Hi Miss Gluyas,
my favourite sentence is, Thick grey ash clouds came oozing out of the volcano, overruling the sky.
xxx From Sophie
I love the use of oozing!
Dear Miss Gluyas,
My favourite sentence from my story is:
They cried in fear, their once beloved city of Pompeii had turned to ash.
Hope you like it
Very sad!
Hi Miss Gluyas I am going to comment on literacy for today.
Many years past and an old lady holding hands with an old man were standing under an orange tree in Pompeii.
I hope you love it.
XXXXX from Rougayatou
That’s a nice ending.