Dear Miss Gluyas,
On Saturday I went on a 7 mile bike ride and went across two bridges. I really enjoyed it. On Sunday I went on a little walk with my mum and this morning I did the daily mile with my brother and my mum.
Hi Miss Gluyas
I’m glad you had a nice weekend. I went for a bike ride yesterday.
This is my sentence
professor Fizz hoped that he wouldnt have any more strange re-actions to his potion
Professor Fizz hoped that he would not have anymore strange reactions to his potion.
I’m happy for you to choose which one. Mr Gonzalo is giving you art activities because he would normally teach you art but I found that cool recycling website and I thought it would be a great idea for you, so you decide!
Hi Celia, the homework is on the blog post where you asked this question! It’s 3 pages long, you have to press the right hand corner to turn to the next page.
Dear Miss Gluyas,
On Saturday I went on a 7 mile bike ride and went across two bridges. I really enjoyed it. On Sunday I went on a little walk with my mum and this morning I did the daily mile with my brother and my mum.
You are being so active Betty, I’m so impressed!
Hi Miss Gluyas.
How are you?
I’m fine.
Now I am going to show you my sentence for today.
Professor Fizz clutched the miracle potion in to his gloved hand.
Hi Dominic, I’m good! Great sentence. I tried to call you today but I’ll try again tomorrow.
what one do we do
What one of what do you do?
Sorry I posted this by accident!
Okay, all good!
For many days and nights he had been trying to perfect his recipient. This is for the grammar edit a text for professor fizz.
Recipient doesn’t make sense! What else do you think it could be?
Dear Miss Gluyas,
I can’ find out how to get on to page 3
From Elizabeth
Have you figured it out now? You should be able to click the bottom right hand corner of the page to turn it.
One of my sentences is:
for many days and nights,he had been trying to purfect this recipe.
For many days and nights,he had been trying to perfect this recipe.
Much better sentence!
Hi Miss Gluyas
I’m glad you had a nice weekend. I went for a bike ride yesterday.
This is my sentence
professor Fizz hoped that he wouldnt have any more strange re-actions to his potion
Professor Fizz hoped that he would not have anymore strange reactions to his potion.
I went for a bike ride today! Great sentence.
Are we meant to do the Art activity that is on the timetable or do Gonzalos Art that he put on his blog? Because I have been doing the Recycling Art.
I’m happy for you to choose which one. Mr Gonzalo is giving you art activities because he would normally teach you art but I found that cool recycling website and I thought it would be a great idea for you, so you decide!
Dear Miss Gluyas,
He pulled the cork from the top of the bubbling beaker.That was my sentence.
from Areej
Great sentence Areej!
Where can I find the homework
Hi Celia, the homework is on the blog post where you asked this question! It’s 3 pages long, you have to press the right hand corner to turn to the next page.
Der Miss Gluyas
Hear is my sentence:
Almost immediately Professor Fizz began to feel very strange.
Lots of love
Lydia xxxxxxx
xxx
Don’t forget your comma after your fronted adverbial! It should be after “almost immediately”.
Hi Miss Gluyas, the sentence I have chosen is,
Now that the brew was exactly right, it was time for a test.
From Sophie xxx
Great sentence Sophie!
Hi miss Gluyas,
Sorry, I wasn’t able to speak with you on the phone. My mom was out shopping.
Irfan
That’s okay Irfan! I’ll try again tomorrow.
Hi Miss Gluyas here is my favourite sentence that I corrected,
Professor Fizz clutched the miracle potion in his gloved hand.
XXX love Rougayatou
Great sentence Rougayatou!
Miss gluyas I posted my art work I hope you see it and like it
I just saw it, I’m very impressed!
Hi Miss Gluyas,
I really liked this story is there a book of it? my sentence is
Almost immediately Professor Fizz began to feel very strange. Thank you for calling me.
Love from Safa
I’m not sure if there is a real story of it, I’m glad you liked it though!